HI Peeps.
This is the first time I've ever bothered to write in my journal, but I felt it was the best way to let everybody know what was going on and to ask a question. First, I've been thinking of deleting zoloslave and creating a new account on deviant art under a new name. What that name will be I will let you know once I get it set up, before I delete this account. Second, I have been recently enjoying a manga called Fairy Tail and have been inspired to create a fanfic for it. However, I seem to have designed two OCs for the fic but I can't decide which one I want to use. So here's the question: Which one? Here's a brief profile for each of them and I would love some input from my fellow deviants as to which one you like best.

Here's the first one:

Name: Dyne Asilem (dine ah-ci-lem)
Age: 18
Magic: Ex-quip/Artificer
Likes: Artificing, exploring and finding rare materials to make stuff with
Dislikes: People breaking her stuff
Appearance: short, wild, white-gold hair; crimson eyes; normal complexion; 5' 7" with a well toned, but not bulky, build and body shape
FAQ: Artificing - an artificer is a mage who specializes in the manufaturing of magical items. Dyne is an ex-quip mage like Erza, but she can also artifice during battle allowing her to change her weapons to suit her opponent. For example, say she's fighting an ice mage, she could use materials she's gathered to forge a normal steel sword into a fire sword in the middle of battle or even make a sheild out of ice left over from one of her opponent's spells. She is from another country and after traveling, visiting many other guilds along the way, she settled at Fairy Tail. Markov convinced her to join (haven't decided how yet). But she spends most of her time tinkering in one of the store rooms or fixing any damage the idiots of Fairy Tail cause to the guild. Starting Relationships - She and Erza have a mild rivalry as they're both ex-quip mages, but Erza often goes to Dyne for armor repairs so they have a gruging respect for one another. She finds Natsu amusing to be around and sometimes asks him if she can use some of his dragon fire to make special items, but she can't stand it when he randomly wrecks the guild especially right after she fixed it. Dyne gets along pretty well with Gray too, and can't help but point out the brotherly relationship he and Natsu have; though they both adamently deny it. She is a little embarrased by his stripping habit, but since he doesn't seem to do it on purpose she just carries an extra outfit or two with her that she tosses at him if she happens to be traveling with him instead of getting mad. But she gets just as mad at him when he and Natsu start wrecking the place. Loki hit on her once, but she just ignored him as she'd seen him do that to all the girls he meets so she feels she can't take him seriously about that. She and Maryjane often work together, maintaining the guild so they're good friends. She can't stand Luxus because he's such an arrogant jerk and they often tell each other off, but he won't attack her becuase their first fight nearly killed them both, (spoiler so that's all I'm putting in here).

Here's number 2:

Name: Atra Endiles (ah-trah en-de-less)
Age: 20
Magic: Dark DragonSlayer Magic
Likes: Books, Peace and quiet, Nature
Dislikes: Loud noises, bright lights, being alone
Appearance: long, wild, amethyst-colored hair; silver eyes; pale complexion; 5' 8" with an average build and body shape
FAQ: Yes, Atra is a dragon slayer magic user like Natsu and Gazille. But instead of material substances like fire and metal, she eats and weilds dark magic in all its' forms. This includes normal shadows (which also allows her to understand the true nature of an object or person when she eats the shadow), various dark magic spells like curses, and dark mana (basically particals of dark magic that become present in the air at night or in areas/items that have powerful dark magic spells in or around them). Atra's magic normally appears as a black coating over her body but she can also change its shape to suit her needs. Like making shadow claws on her hands for attacking. A strange side-effect of her magic is that she always has a pair of sleek, black, cylinder-shaped horns sticking out and back from her temples and a long, whip-like, black tail with a sharp spade on the end. Like the shadows, she can change their size and shape but she can never remove them so she usually has to hide them with her loose baggy clothes and hoodies. This strange appearance has afforded her much distrust and anmosity amoung normal people and mages, but she is acctually very good-natured. She doesn't have any relationships with any of the other main characters yet since she isn't in the guild from the story start. Natsu, Happy and Lucy run into her during one of their jobs and she joins afterward. She will probably get along well with Lucy as they both love books and she understands about personal boundries since she's shy. Atra wants to get to know Natsu better since he's the first, dragon-raised, dragon slayer she's met, but she doesn't want anyone to know that she is a dragon slayer since she was raised by the Dark Dragon Shardesh, a former minion of Zereff, (for those who don't know the story, he's a bad guy). So she pretends to be a shadow mage at first. Being a peacefull individual, she'll porbably try to play peace-keeper in the guild when fights break out, but don't take her passive personality lightly, she can be terrifyingly vicious when angered. It just takes a lot to make her mad.

Okay, if there are any further questions about either of them, go ahead and ask. I'll tally up the votes in about a month. Thanks in advance! ^_^